Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
I like that its gruesome definitely and its funny and innovative how you included the guns
I like your piece of writing Zak it was very "Constructive" and Gruesome and Funny I like how you added guns and knifes. Well Done. From Kahi
very bloody, gruesome,Villeint but very funny lots of eating of different species
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I like that its gruesome definitely and its funny and innovative how you included the guns
ReplyDeleteI like your piece of writing Zak it was very "Constructive" and Gruesome and Funny I like how you added guns and knifes. Well Done. From Kahi
ReplyDeletevery bloody, gruesome,Villeint but very funny lots of eating of different species
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