Monday, February 12, 2018

Autobiography poem

3 comments:

  1. I like the way you talked, it was a strong voice.Maybe you can try and add some expression in to it next time. I also like Egypt and trains too but mostly I like my PlayStation 3. Check out my blog please! http://lakebrunnergabrielm.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. Thanks for commenting, I will try to add expression next time.

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  2. I like your poem because it rhymes. I can relate to you because I like robotics as well. But if you went to Egypt what part would you go to?
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